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    Could you correct the sentences?

    Hi! Teachers:
    Could you paraphrase and correct what I described ?
    I have an acquaintance who wanted to go to the mountains by bicycle.
    So I said :Why don't you go to the mountains by car?
    The weather is capricious and it's windy on the way to the mountains.
    By car is more comfortable than by bike and you won't feel tired more by car than by bike.
    Could you paraphrase and correct it for me?
    I am learning expression in English and can't do it well.I hope my sentences are idiomatic.So I will be very appreciated if you can correct it for me.
    Thanks a lot!


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    Re: Could you correct the sentences?

    Why don't you go to the mountains by car? The weather is capricious and it's windy on the way to the mountains. Going by car will be more comfortable than by bike and you won't feel tired when you get there. more by car than by bike. omit

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    Re: Could you correct the sentences?

    Thanks a lot!

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