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    Kindly check for grammar, a small paragraph

    I can be either successful or unsuccessful, but success will be with me because I believe putting all my efforts to achieve my goals. If unsuccessful, it will fuel my passion to work even harder and it will spark my determination to go all out for it. I firmly believe in saying, “Winner never quit, because quitter never win”. Each unsuccessful attempt is nothing but a step closer to my goals.

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    Smile Re: Kindly check for grammar, a small paragraph

    Here's one correction:

    I would say: Winners never quit, because quitters never win.

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    Re: Kindly check for grammar, a small paragraph

    Quote Originally Posted by thedailyenglishshow View Post
    Here's one correction:

    I would say: Winners never quit, because quitters never win.
    Thanks buddy, I hope rest all is perfect grammatically....


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    Re: Kindly check for grammar, a small paragraph

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    I can be either successful or unsuccessful, but success will be with me because I believe in putting all my efforts into achieving my goals. If unsuccessful, my passion will be fuelled to work even harder and it will spark my determination to go all out. I firmly believe in saying, “Winner never quit, because quitter never win”. Each unsuccessful attempt is merely a step closer to my goals.
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