Student or Learner
Sunnydale International School,
Subject:Application for leave of absence from 12-16th October.
My daughter,Adeena Haque,a student of nursery(Blue skies,Day shift) was unable to attend school from 12-16th of this month due to some familial problems.I hope you would grant her leave of absence for those days only.
Dr. Rushaida Haque.
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