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    is this writing alright???

    The Principal,
    Sunnydale International School,

    Subject:Application for leave of absence from 12-16th October.

    Dear Madam,

    My daughter,Adeena Haque,a student of nursery(Blue skies,Day shift) was unable to attend school from 12-16th of this month due to some familial problems.I hope you would grant her leave of absence for those days only.

    Thanking you,
    Dr. Rushaida Haque.

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    Re: is this writing alright???

    Add spaces after punctuation. Otherwise it looks fine.

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