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Hi there,
Could you proofread the following sentences?
Health childhood is important for the development for children. War and diseasters may make childhood have a bad shadow.
thanks
pete pva
Hi Peter
As a Brit, but not a teacher, I would suggest the following:
Health during childhood is important for children's development.
War and diseasters may cast a bad shadow childhood development.
Hope this helps
NT
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