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    Hi,

    Please help me to resolve this problem urgently, I need to create a form for other department to use for requesting to advertise thier product promotion in our system call ZA, so that their promotion will displaying in the ZA system screen.

    The heading of the form Is " ZA Screen Advertising Request Form", is it correct ?

    Thanks

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    Looks fine.

    If you want it to be shorter, you may leave off the word "Form." That's kinda obvious, isn't it? Like writing FAX on a fax - why? Could it be mistaken for an e-mail? Do we write "This is a letter" on a letter?


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    Thank you very much, I was fear that others will confuse that it is refering to advertise for the ZA system itself. Can I put it this way... "Request for ZA Adverstising Space" ? which one is better?

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    I don't think there would be any confusion. I don't think people would expect you to have a form to complete so that they could advertise YOUR product.


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    Hi Jlinger;

    What is the difference if I put it this way, "ZA Screen Advertisement Request" ?

    Thanks

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    It can mean either, of course, but I doubt it would be confusing. I can't imagine that you would produce a form or even a document that solicts people to put your ads for ZA product on their media. You would use THEIR "CNN Airtime Request" [or whatever it might be called] form for that.


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    for example, if I want to let others place their ads in my ATM machine, can I put it this way "ATM Advertising Space Request" or "ATM Advertisement Space Request", which one is better? or any other sugestion?

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    Advertising.

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