Student or Learner
Can you please check the following sentences?
1. Since the readers of this magazine can be anyone, coming from any kind of educational background.
2. This text, as we know, is an advertisement and therefore it is directed at the reader directly.
'The text, as we know, is (just) an advertisement aimed directly at the reader.'
But the above sentence is redundant too, so I can only suggest something like the following sentence.
'The text, as we know, is (just an)(nothing but an) advertisement.'
I can't help you any more with your second sentence.
Your first sentence can be changed into a complete sentence by omitting "Since".
Last edited by 2006; 23-Oct-2008 at 23:21. Reason: correct an error