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  1. #1

    What was I wrong?

    Hi,

    I wrote like this "In the interest of a mechanical motivation for problem 1, let us consider a model of the shock of a solid body and a visco-elastic bar".

    Please, tell me if there was anything wrong!

    Thanks.

    A nice day!

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    #2

    Re: What was I wrong?

    How about:


    In the interest of a mechanical motivation for problem 1, let us consider shock to the solid body and visco-elastic bar as a model.

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    Re: What was I wrong?

    Quote Originally Posted by susiedqq View Post
    How about:


    In the interest of a mechanical motivation for problem 1, let us consider shock to the solid body and visco-elastic bar as a model.
    Hi,

    Thank you very much.

    I like it, it sounds more interesting. Should we use "... the shock of..." instead of "...shock to..."?


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    Re: What was I wrong?

    Your paper is presenting a study of shock to the body, right?

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    Re: What was I wrong?

    Quote Originally Posted by susiedqq View Post
    Your paper is presenting a study of shock to the body, right?
    Hi,

    It is presenting the shock between a solid body and a bar.

    Actually, I felt unclear with "...shock to..."! I guess it should be "...the shock of..." or "... the shock between...". I really need your explanation.

    Thanks
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    #6

    Re: What was I wrong?

    "In the interest of a mechanical motivation for problem 1, let us consider a model demonstrating the shock between a solid body and a visco-elastic bar".

  4. #7

    Re: What was I wrong?

    Hi susiedqq,

    This sounds great, I truly like it. Thank you very much

    Have nice day

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