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  1. Thurein
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    My trip to Cox Farm

    Dear Sir,

    I'm 8 yrs old student.
    Today i went to Farm for excussion
    Here is what i did.

    We went to Cox farm in Virginia

    Today we went to Cox farm by School bus.
    We left the school at 9:00 am.
    We are divided by group.
    Our group has 5 students.
    We look around the farm with Tractor.
    The scene was very beautiful.
    We took lunch at there.
    Everyone got one pumpkin.
    On the way back to school all of us are happy.

    Pls. edit and check the usage

    Best Regards,

    Thurein

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    Re: My trip to Cox Farm

    (Not a teacher)

    Thurein,

    That is a good summary of your trip. My main suggestion would be to keep everything in the past tense as you are describing something that has already happened:

    Today we went to Cox Farm by school bus.
    We left the school at 9:00 a.m.
    We were divided into groups.
    Our group had five students.
    We looked around the farm on a tractor.
    The scenery was very beautiful.
    We took (had) lunch there.
    Everyone got one pumpkin.
    On the way back to school all of us were happy.

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