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    Resume doubt.

    Hi all,

    I'm preparing my resume and I'd like to know if someone could help me with some doubts:

    Thanks

    1st: which phrase would be better to write and if there is any mistake.

    Objective:To improve my professional skills and develop a career at a company where I can contribute overcoming great challenges.



    Objective:To improve my professional skills and develop a career at a company where I can contribute to overcomegreat challenges.



    Objective:To improve my professional skills and develop a career at a company where I can contribute to the overcoming of great challenges.


    2nd: Should I write "develop a career at a company" or "develop a career at a company"

    3rd: Is there any mistake on the following text?:

    Overseas experience



    • Trip to South Africa, Lesotho, Namibia, Swaziland and Mozambique, Dec. 2007 - Mar. 2008
      • International and life experience
      • Strong ability to deal with adversities
      • Contact with different people and cultures



    • Work experience in the USA, Dec. 2004 - Mar. 2005
      • Improvement in English fluency
      • Immersion in the culture and way of life of the country.

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    #2

    Re: Resume doubt.

    1st: which phrase would be better to write and if there is any mistake.

    Objective: To improve my professional skills and develop a career with a company where I can contribute to overcoming great challenges.

    2nd: Should I write "develop a career at a company" or "develop a career at a company"

    Use with a company.


    3rd: Is there any mistake on the following text?:

    Overseas experience



    • Trip to South Africa, Lesotho, Namibia, Swaziland and Mozambique, Dec. 2007 - Mar. 2008 where I was able to:
      • Experience International lifeskills
      • Strengthen abilities in dealing with adversities
      • Connect with different people and cultures


    • Work experience in the USA, Dec. 2004 - Mar. 2005 where I was able to:
      • Improve fluency in English
      • Immerse in the culture and life of the country.


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    #3

    Re: Resume doubt.

    Hi susiedqq,

    Thank you for your help.
    Just one question regarding the 3rd topic.
    Was the previous text (
    Overseas experience) grammatically wrong or you thought the way you wrote is better?

    Thanks again

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