computer games

[peter123]

Hi there,
Is it correct to say like this?

Students nowadays play computer games very often because they can get more fun, achievement excitement from it than they can from their studies.

Thanks
pete lily

[Anglika]

Hi there,
Is it correct to say like this?

Students nowadays play computer games very often because they can get more fun, achievement and excitement from it than they can from their studies.

Thanks
pete lily

Grammatically it is ok.

I would qualify that statement: ...because they think that they can get...