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    Post Please correct the following sentences

    Upon we received the request from the client through Mr. Simon , I contacted M/s XXX and asked them to do the site inspection and send us a quotation. We received a quotation from this company dated 20/10/08, But their delivery time was not acceptable to us as it was 4 - 6 weeks from order confirmation.

    As a second option, I contacted M/s XXXX for to do the same work. As per Client's program, they came to the site for site survey for 2 days, but they didn't get the site access. Then I asked Mr. X( Maintenance team - Manager) to inform us when the site access is ready, but still they didn't come back to us.

    Also, note that I have reported to Mr. Simon regaring this subject day to day basis


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    Re: Please correct the following sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by Annecy View Post
    Upon we received receiving the request from the client through Mr. Simon, I contacted Messrs XXX and asked them to do the site inspection and send us a quotation. We received a quotation from this company dated 20/10/08, But their delivery time was not acceptable to us as it was 4 - 6 weeks from order confirmation.

    As a second option, I contacted Messrs XXXX and asked them to quote for doing the same work. As per the client's program, they came to the site for a site survey for 2 days, but they didn't get the site access access to the site. Then I asked Mr. X ( manager of the Maintenance team) to inform us when the site access is ready, but still they haven't come back to us.

    Also, note that I have reported to Mr. Simon regarding this subject on a day-to-day basis
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