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    proofreading needed

    I need a proofreader about this paragraph, please help. Thanks.
    "Overall, after the critical analysis of the research studies done and of the related literature, a mixture of chlorhexidine and alcohol showed superiority in terms of decreasing normal flora. But disadvantage like skin irritation on prolonged use makes it less perfect and makes other skin antiseptics better in one way or another. Despite of that, the result of this assignment is worth considering when changing institutional policies and practices on the use of skin antiseptics in terms of efficiency and cost effectiveness".

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    Re: proofreading needed

    "Overall, after the critical analysis of the research studies done and of the related literature, a mixture of chlorhexidine and alcohol showed superiority in terms of decreasing normal flora. But disadvantage like skin irritation on prolonged use makes it less perfect and makes other skin antiseptics better in one way or another. Despite of that, the result of this assignment is worth considering when changing institutional policies and practices on the use of skin antiseptics in terms of efficiency and cost effectiveness".

    After a critical analysis of research studies and related literature, a mixture of chlorhexadine and alcohol is shown to be superior in terms of decreasing normal flora. Skin irritation on prolonged use makes it less than perfect however, and other skin antiseptics better (in some way). Despite that, in terms of efficiency and cost effectiveness, the results of this assignment are worth considering when changing institutional policies and practices with regards to skin antiseptics.

    I hope this is close to what you wanted to say. Sorry if I lost any of your meaning.

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