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  1. rmsh16's Avatar
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    LPG refill cylinder

    Pl. proofread.


    Dear Sir,

    I am booking for the refill cylinder through email after my umpteen tries to your landline numbers (41144619-20, 25656398 etc.)

    Please arrange to deliver the refill Indane LPG Cylinder to the below mentioned address on priority.

    Name: XXXXX
    Consumer No: XXXX
    Address: XXXXX

    Waiting List No: ___________
    Booking Date: 05/11/2008

    Please acknowledge by reverting the waiting list number.

    Cheers
    Rasna

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    Re: LPG refill cylinder

    Well, I believe this is a business letter, so I think you better keep words formal, (umpteen) is informal, you can easily use (many). Also this (on priority) seems strange; There are correct usages with priority as (top priority, first priority, on your list of priorities).
    Last edited by Reemy; 05-Nov-2008 at 22:37.

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    Re: LPG refill cylinder

    Date : 05/Nov/2008

    To,
    The Indane Gas Agency,
    Baswangudi, Bangalore. 500000

    Subject : Delay in booking by telephone numbers.
    Reference : My consumer no. 123456
    Dear Sir,

    I am forced to book for the refill cylinder through email after my umpteen tries to your landline numbers (41144619-20, 25656398 etc.) failed to evoke any response for last five days.

    Kindly arrange to deliver the refill Indane LPG Cylinder at the address with top priority.

    Name: XXXXX
    Consumer No: XXXX
    Address: XXXXX

    Waiting List No: ___________
    Booking Date: 05/11/2008

    Kindly acknowledge the same at your earliest.

    Thanking You,

    Yours truly,

    (RASNA RAMESH)

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