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    Please correct this sentece

    Dear all,

    Please correct the following sentence,

    Political rhetoric may have win President Obama the election, but only the right course of action will win the voters' stamp of approval.

    Thank you,

    sampahmel

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    Re: Please correct this sentece

    Quote Originally Posted by sampahmel View Post
    Dear all,

    Please correct the following sentence,

    Political rhetoric may have won President-elect Obama the election, but only the right course of action will win the voters' stamp of approval.

    Thank you,

    sampahmel
    The sentence is grammatically corrrect now.

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    Re: Please correct this sentece

    I might put it this way:

    Political rhetoric may have won the election for President Obama, but only the right course of action will win the voters' stamp of approval.

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