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    is this passage correct?

    Last week, Jane went to see a fortune-teller for fun .the fortune-tellers was dark and stuffy. She told Jane that she will very successful and she will have long life and she will marry a rich and handsome man she also said that Jane will receive a very important note about money.
    Jane pleased and left there when she returned to her car she saw a note on her windshield .at first she pleased but that was a parking ticket for 25 $.


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    Re: is this passage correct?

    Last week, Jane went to see a fortune-teller for fun. The fortune-teller was dark and

    stuffy:This word, referring to a person, means 'conventional and narrow-minded; not receptive to new or unusual ideas and behavior.'
    Do you mean something like, 'mysterious'?


    She told Jane that she would be very successful and (she will)(omit) have a long life, and (she will)(omit) marry a rich and handsome man. She also said that Jane would receive a very important communication about money.
    Jane was pleased, and left. (there)(omit) When she returned to her car, she saw a note on her windshield. At first she was pleased, but

    that was a parking ticket for 25 $.: then realized/saw that it was a $25 parking ticket.

    Remember that the first word of every new sentence has a capital letter.

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