Student or Learner
Last week, Jane went to see a fortune-teller for fun .the fortune-tellers was dark and stuffy. She told Jane that she will very successful and she will have long life and she will marry a rich and handsome man she also said that Jane will receive a very important note about money.
Jane pleased and left there when she returned to her car she saw a note on her windshield .at first she pleased but that was a parking ticket for 25 $.
Last week, Jane went to see a fortune-teller for fun. The fortune-teller was dark and
stuffy:This word, referring to a person, means 'conventional and narrow-minded; not receptive to new or unusual ideas and behavior.'
Do you mean something like, 'mysterious'?
She told Jane that she would be very successful and (she will)(omit) have a long life, and (she will)(omit) marry a rich and handsome man. She also said that Jane would receive a very important communication about money.
Jane was pleased, and left. (there)(omit) When she returned to her car, she saw a note on her windshield. At first she was pleased, but
that was a parking ticket for 25 $.: then realized/saw that it was a $25 parking ticket.
Remember that the first word of every new sentence has a capital letter.