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    #1

    controversial

    Hi there,
    Can you proofread the following sentences?

    The drawbacks of playing computer games are controversial. Some studies show that playing of computer games over the long period of time will cause finger joints wear and tear, back pain and eyes strain.

    Tks
    pete


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    #2

    Re: controversial

    Quote Originally Posted by peter123 View Post
    Hi there,
    Can you proofread the following sentences?

    The drawbacks of playing computer games are controversial. Some studies show that playing of computer games over a long period of time will cause wear and tear on the fingerjoints or RSI, back pain and eyestrain.

    Tks
    pete
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