I would like to know if we need to capitalize the first letters in the words: College Diploma.
Secondly, which is better:
-Unfortunately, I failed the English Exit exam required in order to receive my college diploma.
-Unfortunately, I failed the English Exit exam required for my college diploma.
I would capitalize college diploma only when used as part of a complete formal name while writing a business letter, for example.Originally Posted by Unregistered
"In 1997 I earned a Utah College Diploma in Business Administration".
As for your other question, I like the second sentence better...short and to the point.