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    Post Kindly correct the following sentences

    I got this message two days before. We are investigating the rodent's roots. As per our investigation, I noticed that some of your staff are leaving their leftover(like bred, cheese....etc) in their cupbords. So please advise your staff to not to leave any foods when they leaving to home. Other things, we would coordinate with Mr. X and fix within two days..


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    Re: Kindly correct the following sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by Annecy View Post
    We have received this message two days before and inspect the rodent's roots. As per our inspection, we noticed that some of your staff were leaving their leftover (like bread, cheese....etc) in their cupboards. Please advise your staff not to leave any food when they leave for home and inform them to use the dustbin. We are coordinating with Mr. X, Pest Control and fix the problem within two days.
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    Re: Kindly correct the following sentences

    I got this message two days before. We are investigating the rodent's roots.
    I received this message two days ago. We are investigating into the cause of the rodent problem.

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