I am not a teacher..hi everyone i hope you all fain
i wrote a paragraph but i don't know it is correct or not
My brother works everyday at my father's company .
He works hard. He wakes up at 5 am and goes to work at 6 am.When he returns home, he changes his clothes quickly to go for playing footbool from 5 to 8 . When he comes back home, he is so tired and angry that he doesn't like to talk to anyone at home. He just have his meal while watching tennis on T.V.; he likes tennis ( or you can say he is fond of tennis). After that he goes to his bed at 10 pm .
please tell me is it correct or not
tomorrow i'll show it to my teacher
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