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    end of world

    Hi there,
    Can you proofread the sentence?

    Teenagers nowadays are too weak mentally to face problems. When they meet problems, they will think it is the end of the world.

    tks
    pete

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    Re: end of world

    Quote Originally Posted by peter123 View Post
    Hi there,
    Can you proofread the sentence?

    Teenagers nowadays are too weak mentally to face problems. When they meet problems, they will think it is the end of the world.

    tks
    pete
    Don't you think it should be teenagers..........are mentally too weak to....... ?

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    Re: end of world

    Quote Originally Posted by peter123 View Post
    Hi there,
    Can you proofread the sentence?

    Teenagers nowadays are too weak mentally to face problems. When they meet problems, they will think it is the end of the world.

    tks
    pete
    When they meet problems, they think it is the end of the world.
    When they finally meet real problems, they will think it's the end of the world.
    Were they to meet problems, they would think it was the end of the world.

    Petra


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