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    Post writing a message

    Would you plz help to write out the below message. THANKS


    Patron called to response to our notice about book "X". He said he left the book "X" in a box while he was living out of the town in "x". He was told about the maximum fines and replacement cost if materilas get lost.
    Last edited by jkl; 01-Mar-2009 at 23:38.

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    Re: writing a message

    How about:

    Patron was called in regards to an overdue library notice for book "X". He said he left the book "X" in a box while he was living out of the town in "x". He was reminded of the library's maximum overdue fines and replacement cost policy for unreturned books.


    (You don't have to worry if the book is lost or not. The library's concern is that the book has not been returned!)

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    Re: writing a message

    Quote Originally Posted by jkl View Post
    Would you plz help to write out the below message. THANKS


    Patron called to response to a overdue library notice about book "X". He said he left the book "X" in a box while he was living out of the town in "x". He was told about the maximum overdue fines and replacement cost if book is gets lost.
    Patron called in response to a (library) overdue book notice regarding book 'X'. He said he left the book in a box while he was living out of town in 'x'. The patron was informed of the maximum overdue fines and the replacement cost if the book has been lost.

    I hope this is helpful,

    Petra

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