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    whats wrong with the following sentence?

    whats wrong with the following sentence?

    Each staff member had a different reaction when they listened to the noises from the totem poles.

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    Re: whats wrong with the following sentence?

    Is this the issue?

    Each staff member had a different reaction when they listened to the noises from the totem poles.

    Actually, the singular staff member can be referred to as collective they.

    If you want, change it to:

    Each staff member had a different reaction
    when listening to the noises . . .

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