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    #1

    Please check it.

    1. Getting sick is the worse thing in life.

    2. Don't you think that CEO's play games when they were kid.

    3. The Christmas tree sparkling the light like radiance.



    Thanks!


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    Re: Please check it.

    2. Don't you think that CEO's play games when they were kid.

    (a) check the tenses of the verbs
    (b) check singular versus plural nouns
    (c) what exactly to the "CEO's" possess or own?


    3. The Christmas tree sparkling the light like radiance.
    Let me put it this way: check the tense of the verb
    Last edited by David L.; 06-Dec-2008 at 15:13.

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    #3

    Re: Please check it.

    I mean, for question number 2, CEO meant to be Chief Executive Officer. So I would like to know whether he/she (Did they play games when they were young?)

    For the last one, I wanted to say that the lights on the tree is shining like radiance or something like that.


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    #4

    Re: Please check it.

    Thanks anyway!


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    #5

    Re: Please check it.

    A native speaker grasps the meaning of each of your sentences.

    My point is: they are grammatically INCORRECT.

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    #6

    Re: Please check it.

    Well, I'll make up a new one.

    Thanks!

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    #7

    Re: Please check it.

    Quote Originally Posted by jomo27 View Post
    Well, I'll make up a new one.

    Thanks!
    Another triumph for "ductation"!

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    Re: Please check it.

    :-d

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