Could you correct my essay please?

[elyb]

Thank you so much!

[RonBee]

Make paragraphs. Also, make sure every sentence has a verb.

Learn how to write a sentence and paragraph!
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Check for spelling mistakes.

What is the topic of your essay?


(Not everybody wants to open attachments.)

[RonBee]

Rewrite your essay one paragraph at a time. Then post it here - one paragraph at a time.


Reread it and then rewrite it. Assume it needs improvement. Don't be afraid to throw things out.

[elyb]

Sorry but I can't post it here, otherwise anyone could find it through google..
Thank's