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    Please check it.

    Thank you very much whoever you are!




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    1. There is no fate, you made your own fate.

    2. I'll become a philanthropist when I've achieved all my goals.

    3. Creativity is important in competition.

    4. Critical thinking is the key to a success.

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    Re: Please check it.

    Quote Originally Posted by jomo27 View Post
    thank you very much whoever you are!




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    1. There is no fate, you made your own fate. you can't use a comma there; you need a semicolon or a period.

    2. I'll become a philanthropist when i've achieved all my goals.

    3. Creativity is important in competition.

    4. Critical thinking is the key to a success. omit "a".
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    Re: Please check it.

    Thanks!

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