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    #1

    Kindly check my sentences...

    1. I am calling him since Tuesday, once he picked up and said that he will get back to me, but neither he called back nor he is answering my calls.

    2. In the turbulent market, it is always advisable to not to park all your investments in one stock, if market further goes deep into red it would be jaw-dropping shock for you.

    3. Stunning silence gripped everyone in the auditorium, when the principal of the college slipped from the dais.


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    Re: Kindly check my sentences...

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    1. I am calling him since Tuesday, once he picked up and said that he will get back to me, but neither he called back nor he answered my calls.

    2. In the turbulent market, it is always advisable not to park all your investments in one stock, if market further goes deeply into red it would be jaw-dropping shock for you.

    3. Stunning silence gripped everyone in the auditorium, when the principal of the college slipped from the dais.
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    #3

    Re: Kindly check my sentences...

    1. I have been calling him since Tuesday, once, he picked up and said that he would get back to me, but he has neither called back, nor answered my calls.

    2. In a turbulent market, it is advisable to not to park all your investments in one stock, if the market goes further into the red it could be a jaw-dropping shock for you.

    3. A stunned silence gripped everyone in the auditorium, when the principal of the college slipped from the dais.

    My suggestions are in red.

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