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    apprised the retirement day

    I would like to know whether this sentence sounds good and is correct or not.

    The shoulder pain from wear and tear apprised him that he is close to retirement.


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    #2

    Re: apprised the retirement day

    Not really.

    Tty:

    The pain in his shoulder, the result of wear and tear, reminded him that he is close to retirement.

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    Re: apprised the retirement day

    How about:

    He apprised the pain caused from wear and tear in his shoulder and reminded himself that he was close to retirement.

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