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    is it correct?

    would you correct this paragraph please:



    Uesful Advice for Your Health


    Caring about your health is very important . you should learn some healthy habits to get a long good life .
    there are many things that you can do to keep your health . Eat your Breakfast Every Morning and your diner before 7 p.m.
    drink a lot of water ,eat fruit and vegetables . get 8 hours of sleep each night and keep yourself a way from stress .
    Do exercise three times a week. check up your body every 6 months.
    Having one spoonful of honey a day is very useful to keep your immunity strong .
    these things are very easy to do but their benefits are great .

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    Re: is it correct?

    Uesful Advice for Your Health

    Caring about your health is very important . you should learn some healthy habits to get a long good life .
    there are many things that you can do to keep your health . Eat your Breakfast Every Morning and your diner before 7 p.m. drink a lot of water ,eat fruit and vegetables . get 8 hours of sleep each night and keep yourself a way from stress . Do exercise three times a week. check up your body every 6 months. Having one spoonful of honey a day is very useful to keep your immunity strong . these things are very easy to do but their benefits are great .

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    Re: is it correct?

    + one that Soup missed: a 'diner' is a place where you can buy things to eat.

    b

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