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    Please check these two sentences

    Hi, would you please check if these sentenses are correct and sound good. Thanks

    Our national team elminated from the tournament pours the cold water on our enthusiasms to watch the rest of the matches

    But his speech doesn't endear him to the public. The public has never forgot what he did to the victims. Everytime he walks on stages, music is used to muffle the boos.


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    Re: Please check these two sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by redgiant View Post
    Hi, would you please check if these sentenses are correct and sound good. Thanks

    Our national team elminated from the tournament pours the cold water on our enthusiasms to watch the rest of the matches

    The elimination of our national team from the tournament poured cold water on any enthusiasm for the rest of the tournament.


    But his speech doesn't endear him to the public. The public has never forgotten what he did to the victims. Every time he walks onto a stage, music is used to muffle the boos.
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