Hello, I am Rita, I'm applying to a job in a bank and I will need you to correct my cover letter please? I am stressing out!

Currently enrolled in a Master Program in Entrepreneurship at Toulouse Business School (ESC Toulouse), I have been researching companies of interest that I feel would fit for my professional career. After learning about “BNP PARIBAS graduate career” program, I am very interested in joining your organization as a trading associate.

I have completed my bachelor of business administration and I will graduate in January 2009. During this academic year, our end term project was to develop a business plan. Thus I studied various opportunities for the creation of an ethnic cosmetics distribution firm. This project was instructive insofar as it enabled me to be familiarized with several concepts like strategic development plan, growth management and the financial plan.
Moreover, my end term internship, allowed me to apprehend in a practical way, project management through various tasks. I thus created and followed files suppliers and evaluated inventories. As I had to meet potential investors I elaborated, for a three years period, projected income statements, balance sheets, and cash flow.

Thanks to my various work experiences, I approached multiple facets of a company management what caused versatility in my activities. I am motivated and rigorous in my work; therefore I wish to bring my competences to your company. My education, work experiences and travels, I am confident I am corresponding to this job.