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    email with good subject line

    One of my team mates, xyz, has received excellent feedback from the Client on a project on which, she was an indian participant along with some practitioners from US offices. she has shared this news only with me. please help me how to
    Write an e-mail to the management and seniors informing them about the success and congratulating her on the achievement.

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    Re: email with good subject line

    Perhaps:
    So and So has done a good job and has had good feedback from the client about the project she was working on.



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    Re: email with good subject line

    Thanks for your message.
    Need an email with few sentences and appropriate subject line where the email should focus on the situation.
    Pls....


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    Plz check the mail and correct for errors ie, gramatical, punctuation and vocabulary

    Sub: Good News! Client Announced XYZ as Top Performer

    Dear All,

    I am very glad to inform that xyz was announced as the best performer in entire project by the business.

    Please join me in congratulating xyz for her success and wish her to continue the same in future.

    Regards,
    Sreenivas


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    Re: Plz check the mail and correct for errors ie, gramatical, punctuation and vocabul

    Quote Originally Posted by srinivasz View Post
    Sub: Good News! Client Announced XYZ as Top Performer

    Dear All,

    I am very glad to inform you that xyz was announced as the best performer in the entire project by the client.

    Please join me in congratulating xyz for her successand wish her to continue the same in future.

    Regards,
    Sreenivas

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