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    Check My Sentence Plz

    If I become a rose on my branch, If my broken branch will be on your hands, I am ready to die

    Correct for grammar?
    Last edited by Volcano1985; 26-Dec-2008 at 20:19.

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    Re: Check My Sentence Plz

    Dear Volcano:

    If I become a rose on my branch, If my broken branch will be on your hands, I am ready to die

    I need a bit more understanding of what you are trying to say. Do you mean:
    I am so in love with you that, if I were a rose on a branch and that branch were to be broken from its rosebush, I wouldn't mind, as long as I could be in your hands?

    Best wishes,

    Petra

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    Re: Check My Sentence Plz

    Quote Originally Posted by pyoung View Post
    Dear Volcano:

    If I become a rose on my branch, If my broken branch will be on your hands, I am ready to die

    I need a bit more understanding of what you are trying to say. Do you mean:
    I am so in love with you that, if I were a rose on a branch and that branch were to be broken from its rosebush, I wouldn't mind, as long as I could be in your hands?

    Best wishes,

    Petra
    If I were a rose on a branch and that branch were to be broken from its rosebush, I wouldn't mind dying, as long as I could be in your hands

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