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    colors are a strang world

    Q:Does this passage have any mistakes?Is the MEANING clear?


    Colors are a strange world that our feelings and traits attached to. Usually people link between a feeling or a trait and a certain color, and they may differ very much in that. For example, the color red is a color of love to some people and a color of power and liveliness to others .Also, the color blue is a color of calmness in the opinion of an individual, but it is a color of sadness in the eyes of others. The color yellow is a color of sunrise and warmth to some people and a color that remind others of fire and torment and that how people differ in their views of colors.

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    Re: colors are a strang world

    Quote Originally Posted by move5000 View Post
    Q:Does this passage have any mistakes?Is the MEANING clear?


    Colors are a strange world that our feelings and traits attached to.
    Our feelings are attached to the strange world of colors. What do you mean by traits?

    Usually people link between a feeling or a trait and a certain color, and they may differ very much in that.
    People usually link ...

    For example, the color red is a color of love to some people and a color of power and liveliness to others .Also, the color blue is a color of calmness in the opinion of an individual, but it is a color of sadness in the eyes of others. The color yellow is a color of sunrise and warmth to some people and a color that remind [reminds] others of fire and torment and that [is ] how people differ in their views of colors.
    It should be a little better now

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    Re: colors are a strang world

    Certain feelings are associated with certain colors.

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    Re: colors are a strang world

    Quote Originally Posted by move5000 View Post

    Colors are a strange world that our feelings and traits attached to.
    There is much to say about color. Isn't there?

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