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    Post How do you reckon my writing here? Many thanks

    Dear Phill

    Thank you for your e-mail and clarification.

    Please, find enclosed copies of the invoice no 9047 and credit note no 113.

    In answer to your question about how to prevent the present recurring situation, when you make a money transfer for any payment from your bank account, even if done by internet, please, fill in the note field with the description of your payment putting your account number (xxxx), invoice number (or numbers if many) you are paying for and, in case, also the credit note number (or numbers if many) you are taking/using from your account.

    If you have got further payment details you wish to let us know, please, e-mail them to the address xxxx@xxxxx.

    Do not hesitate to contact me for any question.

    Kind Regards

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    Re: How do you reckon my writing here? Many thanks

    I reckon I'd write it this way:

    Dear Phill

    Thank you for your e-mail and clarification.

    Please, find enclosed copies of the invoice No. 9047
    and credit note No.113.

    Re: your question about how to prevent the present recurring situation: When making a money transfer to make a payment from your bank account, even if done by internet, please fill-in the note fields with the description of your payment. Write your account number (xxxx), invoice number (or numbers) or the credit note number (or numbers) for any deposit or withdrawal or payment.

    If you need any additional transaction details, please, e-mail them to the address xxxx@xxxxx.

    Do not hesitate to contact me for any question.

    Kind Regards

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