Growing children should participate in a variety of indoor and outdoor activities to develop physically as well as mentally. Modern games involve more mental activities, whereas traditional games were more more physical. Some people favor older games and others modern ones. In the following paragraph, I am going to analyze this?.
What will you analyze? These points of view? The merits of each? Your "this" has no clear antecedant. Are you going to it in only one paragraph? It seems silly to have an introduction paragraph and only one follow-on paragraph.

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