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    Correct me please.

    Hi.

    Please correct this passage.

    When learning to drive a car, the most important lesson is to learn to be
    comfortable while behind the wheel. Too many drivers focus too closely on
    the physical act of driving. A good driver is always aware of the road, the cars, and the conditions, at the same time perfectly comfortable and relaxed. Also, in order to be both aware and comfortable, the driver should
    not be concentrating on what could happen, but rather on how to react to his or her surroundings.


    Thanks in advance.

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    Exclamation Re: Correct me please.

    Quote Originally Posted by Grinkl View Post
    Hi.

    Please correct this passage.

    When learning to drive a car, the most important lesson to be learnt is to be comfortable while behind the wheel. Too many drivers focus mostly (too closely) on the physical act of driving. A good driver is always aware of the road, the cars, and the conditions, and at the same time remaining perfectly comfortable and relaxed. Also, in order to be both aware and comfortable, the driver should avoid (not be) concentrating on what could happen, but rather on how to react with (to) his or her surroundings.
    Delete words in brackets.

    mrm
    Last edited by RonBee; 04-Jan-2009 at 19:25. Reason: fix link

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