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    sentences about Christmas holidays

    Hi, are the sentences ok? Please say if they are acceptable before giving alternatives, so I can understand if my attempts were "possible'.
    Thanks Rip


    1) Last Christmas, I had lunch with my brother and his wife's family in Rome in their house.
    2) I had a new game .
    3) Next year I am going to the church with my friends to listen to the Christmas Mass

    4) this Christmas is more beautiful than the last one because this year there is a new person with us: my brother Luca, that is only one month old

    5) Next year Luca will grow and we will play together

    6) my mother is frightened to drive when it is snowing so we stayed at home


    7)Christmas is a very beautiful day: we eat, we play, we have beautiful presents.

    8)All the people are happy and kind


    9) We stay all together and make the christmas tree and the crib

    10) But the most beautiful thing is that I don't go to school


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    Re: sentences about Christmas holidays

    Quote Originally Posted by ripley View Post

    1) Last Christmas, I had lunch with my brother and his wife's family in Rome in their my brother's house. Their? whose? In the house of his wife's family? In his brother's house?
    2) I had a new game.
    3) Next year I am going to the church with my friends to listen to the Christmas Mass???

    4) This Christmas is more beautiful than the last one because this year there is a someone new person with us: my brother Luca, that is only one month old

    5) Next year Luca will grow older and we will play together

    6) My mother is frightened to drive when it is snowing so we stayed at home.


    7)Christmas is a very beautiful day: We eat, we play, we have beautiful presents.

    8)All the people are Everyone is happy and kind.


    9) We stay all together and make decorate the christmas tree and prepare the crib.

    10) But the most beautiful thing is that I don't go to school.


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    Re: sentences about christmas

    Quote Originally Posted by ripley View Post
    Hi, are the sentences ok? Please say if they are acceptable before giving alternatives, so I can understand if my attempts were "possible'.
    Thanks Rip


    1) Last Christmas, I had lunch with my brother and his wife's family in Rome in their house.

    Whose house is it in Rome? Your brother's? Or his in-laws?

    2) I had a new game . but better as "I was given/I received a new game".

    3) Next year I am going to the church attend Christmas Mass with my friends to listen to the Christmas Mass

    4) This Christmas is more beautiful than the last one because this year there is a new person with us: my brother Luca, that who is only one month old

    5) Next year Luca will grow have grown and we will be able to play together

    6) My mother is frightened to drive when it is snowing so we stayed at home


    7)Christmas is a very beautiful day: we eat, we play, we have beautiful presents.

    8)All the people are Everyone is happy and kind


    9) We stay all together and make to decorate the Christmas tree and arrange the crib

    10) But the most beautiful thing is that I don't have to go to school
    ..

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