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    sentences about Christmas (2)

    Hi, I' d like to know if the sentennces are ok. Please say if they are acceptable before giving suggestions to say things in a better way, so I can understand where I am totally wrong

    1)Last year, for Christmas holidays, I went to Rome.
    2) For next Christmas holidays I am going to go to Paris and I am going to cross Place de la Concorde.

    3) Every year my friends ask me what I am going to do next Christmas holidays.

    4) Every year I wish different things but never happens.


    5) For example last year I wanted to go to London but I was sick for all the holidays and I had to stay at home

    6) Next year I am going to spend my holidays abroad and this time it will be so!


    7) in 31 night I went with my father and my mother to La Spezia ( la Spezia is a town) and eat in a restaurant

    8) At 12 we went to the beach to see the fireworks

    9) Last year for Christmas I was in Rom and I played with nintendo Wii


    10). We lunched together


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    Re: sentences about Christmas (2)

    Quote Originally Posted by ripley View Post

    1)Last year, for Christmas holidays, I went to Rome for...
    2) For next Christmas holidays I am going to go to Paris and I am going to cross Place de la Concorde.

    3) Every year my friends ask me what I am going to do during the next Christmas holidays.

    4) Every year I wish different things but they never happens/comes off.


    5) For example, last year I wanted to go to London but I was sick for all throughout the holidays and I had to stay at home.

    6) Next year I am going to spend my holidays abroad and this time it will be so!


    7) in 31 night On NEw Year's Eve I went with my father and my mother to La Spezia ( la Spezia is a town) and we ate in a restaurant.

    8) At 12 (the witching hour) we went to the beach to see the fireworks.
    9) Last year for Christmas I was in Rome and I played with nintendo with Wii.


    10). We lunched together.


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    Re: sentences about christmas b

    Quote Originally Posted by ripley View Post
    Hi, I' d like to know if the sentennces are ok. Please say if they are acceptable before giving suggestions to say things in a better way, so I can understand where I am totally wrong

    1)Last year, for Christmas holidays, I went to Rome. Either "for Christmas" or "for the Christmas holidays".

    2) For next Christmas holidays I am going to go to Paris and I am going to cross the Place de la Concorde.

    3) Every year my friends ask me what I am going to do next Christmas holidays.

    4) Every year I wish to do something different things but it never happens.


    5) For example last year I wanted to go to London but I was sick for all the holidays and I had to stay at home

    6) Next year I am going to spend my holidays abroad and this time it will be so!


    7) On New Year's Eve I went with my father and my mother to La Spezia ( la Spezia is a town) and we ate in a restaurant

    8) At midnight we went to the beach to see the fireworks

    9) Last year for Christmas I was in Rome and I played with nintendo Wii


    10). We lunched together
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