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    sentences about Christmas holidays (3)

    Hi, I' d like to know if the sentennces are ok. Please say if they are acceptable before giving suggestions to say things in a better way, so I can understand where I am totally wrong

    1) I spent my Christmas night at my paternal grandma.

    2) we ate a lot of godd nice food

    3) we ate some turkey like the american people who ate it for thanksgiving day

    4) It was a very funny night


    5) we had lunch at restaurant

    6) for Christmas my friends went in the mountains


    7) I had a lot of presents for Christmas

    8)I usually do a christmas party with my cousins, my uncles and my aunts at my home.

    9) My relatives wanted to do the Christmas party at their house and my sister was very angry for this.

    10)At 9came Santa Claus with all presents

    11) Next year I will do the Christmas party at my house. We will be a lot of persons. There will be a lot of presents for all


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    Re: sentences about Christmas holidays (3)

    Quote Originally Posted by ripley View Post

    1) I spent my Christmas night at my paternal grandma.

    2) We ate a lot of good nice food.

    3) We ate some turkey like the American people who ate eat it for on Thanksgiving Day.

    4) It was a very funny night.


    5) We had lunch at a restaurant.

    6) For Christmas my friends went in the mountains.


    7) I had a lot of presents for Christmas.

    8)I usually do a christmas party with my cousins, my uncles and my aunts at my home.

    9) My relatives wanted to do the Christmas party at their house and my sister was very angry for about/at this.

    10)At 9 came Santa Claus with all the presents.

    11) Next year I will do the Christmas party at my house. We will be there in numbers. a lot of persons There will be a lot of presents for all.


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    Re: sentences about Christmas holidays (3)

    Quote Originally Posted by ripley View Post
    Hi, I' d like to know if the sentences are ok. Please say if they are acceptable before giving suggestions to say things in a better way, so I can understand where I am totally wrong

    1) I spent my Christmas night at my paternal grandma's.

    It is not possible to spend time at someone, but at someone's home/house. You could spend time with someone.

    2) We ate a lot of godd nice food.

    Two adjectives is superfluous. One is enough.

    3) We ate some turkey like the american people who ate it for Thanksgiving day

    They were not Americans but English pioneers/settlers.

    4) It was a very funny night.

    What do you mean by "funny" in this context?


    5) We had lunch at a restaurant

    6) For Christmas my friends went in the mountains

    You spend time in somewhere or go to somewhere.


    7) I had a lot of presents for Christmas

    8)I usually do throw/have a Christmas party at my home with my cousins, my uncles and my aunts .

    9) My relatives wanted to do the Christmas party at their house and my sister was very angry for this.

    You are angry about something.

    10)At 9came Santa Claus Santa Claus came with all presents

    11) Next year I will do the Christmas party at my house. We will be a lot of persons. There will be a lot of presents for all There will be lots of people and lots of presents for them all.
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    Re: sentences about Christmas holidays (3)

    1) I spent my Christmas night at my paternal grandma's.

    2) we ate a lot of good food

    3) we ate some turkey like the American people who eat it for thanksgiving day

    4) It was a very funny night


    5) we had lunch at a restaurant

    6) for Christmas my friends went to the mountains


    7) I had a lot of presents for Christmas

    8)I usually have a christmas party with my cousins, my uncles and my aunts at my home.

    9) My relatives wanted to have the Christmas party at their house and my sister was very angry about this.

    10)At 9 Santa Claus came with all the presents

    11) Next year I will have the Christmas party at my house.There will be a lot of people. There will be a lot of presents for all.

    I don't know what format this is supposed to be in, continuous narrative or seperate statements, so it is difficult for me to correct the punctuation.

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    Re: sentences about Christmas holidays (3)

    hi Anglika,
    sentence 4) I mean it was a night in which I had a lot of fun


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    Re: sentences about Christmas holidays (3)

    "That night/It was great fun"

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