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    plz correct this if it has mistakes.

    (As she is remembered as his sorrow becomes increase) i mean to say that when the person thinks about her his sorrow increases. can it be written in this way in passive emphasizing on subject "she". and how can we use "increase" as a noun after verb"become".

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    Re: plz correct this if it has mistakes.

    Quote Originally Posted by majesticsania View Post
    (As she is remembered as his sorrow becomes increase) i mean to say that when the person thinks about her his sorrow increases. can it be written in this way in passive emphasizing on subject "she". and how can we use "increase" as a noun after verb"become".
    How about this, 'As she is remembered, so his sorrow increases'.

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