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    motivation

    HI
    I want to participate in a work shop and i have written a motivation letter. please read and edit it.
    thanks


    I am planning to continue my studying as a Phd. Student abroad and it is important that I be familiar with new molecular methods related to my major. Besides, I can use them in my thesis and my current Job. Furthermore, it will help me manage my studies more skillfully and beneficial. On the other hand this certificate would help me get scholarship from colleges.
    I am looking forward to hear from you.


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    Re: motivation

    I am planning to continue my studying as a PhdD studies Sstudent abroad. and i It is important that I be (do not use the subjunctive mood) am familiar with new molecular methods related to my major. : Besides, I can use them in my thesis and my current Job. In addition, this certificate would entitles me for a scholarship,. Furthermore, they will which help me manage my studies more skillfully and beneficial effectively. On the other hand, this certificate would help me get scholarship from colleges.
    I am looking forward to hearing from you.

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    Re: motivation

    Quote Originally Posted by marbakhsh View Post




    I am planning to continue my studying as a Phd. Student abroad and it is important that I be familiar with new molecular methods related to my major.
    I plan to continue working toward earning a PhD, and I plan to study abroad. Also, it is important that I familiarize myself with new molecular methods related to my major.
    Quote Originally Posted by marbakhsh View Post
    Besides, I can use them in my thesis and my current Job.

    What does "them" refer to?

    Quote Originally Posted by marbakhsh View Post
    Furthermore, it will help me manage my studies more skillfully and beneficial.

    What does "it" refer to?

    Quote Originally Posted by marbakhsh View Post
    On the other hand this certificate would help me get scholarship from colleges.

    What certificate? Why would you need a scholarship if you have a PhD?

    Quote Originally Posted by marbakhsh View Post
    I am looking forward to hearing from you.


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