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    #1

    proofread

    Hi there,
    Please proofread the following sentences:
    1. My friends and I had looked forward to visiting the park but we did not have a happy experiences there. I trust you will wish to address this complaint.
    2. There was a lot of rubbish (in/on) the ground.

    tks
    pete

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    Re: proofread

    My friends and I had looked forward to visiting the park but we did not have a happy experience. I trust you will address this complaint.

    There was a lot of rubbish on the ground.

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