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    Please help me!

    I would like to have a sample invitation for new show room opening by our marketing manager. I can put the date and name of opener. Can anyone help me in this regard?

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    Re: Please help me!

    Quote Originally Posted by winston View Post
    I would like to have a sample invitation for new show room opening by our marketing manager. I can put the date and name of opener. Can anyone help me in this regard?
    Lots of examples here. Pick and choose.

    I particulary like
    Join the XXX team as they celebrate the opening of their new showroom. Time, place.

    XXX Co. Opening Reception. One and all are invited to toast the opening of the company's new showroom. Time, place.
    In your case, perhaps something like this:

    One and all are invited to join our Marketing Manager XXX YYY and the rest of the ZZZ team, as we celebrate the opening of our new showroom. Date, Time, place.
    Last edited by abaka; 28-Jan-2009 at 19:19.

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    Re: Please help me!

    Thank you Abaka. I am really sorry to say that I couldn't still make the invitation letter from your tips. Please create an invitation letter for me. Consider that I am going to open a new mobile phone show room and invite many friends and colleagues. I would like to give them a invitation card. But the invitation card should have the matter clearly. please make it in simple english. So that everyone can understand easily. please help me.......

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    Re: Please help me!

    Quote Originally Posted by winston View Post
    Thank you Abaka. I am really sorry to say that I couldn't still make the invitation letter from your tips. Please create an invitation letter for me. Consider that I am going to open a new mobile phone show room and invite many friends and colleagues. I would like to give them a invitation card. But the invitation card should have the matter clearly. please make it in simple english. So that everyone can understand easily. please help me.......

    You really must try yourself first, we are not here to do your work for you, but we will help you to revise and refine your own efforts.

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    Re: Please help me!

    An invitation is not the same as an invitation letter.

    An invitation is very short and printed on a card

    You are cordially invited to attend the
    Grand Opening
    of the
    XYZ Mobile Phone Showroom
    on
    Date
    Time
    Place
    - Refreshments Served -
    A letter of invitation would be very personal and have more detail in the body of the letter.

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