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    Could you check the sentence for me?

    Hi teachers:

    I wonder if it is polite ,correct and idomtic.
    Could you check it for me?
    The dentist suggested that John stops eatin some food like chocolate because he has already dacayed teeth.
    Thanks a lot!

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    Re: Could you check the sentence for me?

    Quote Originally Posted by WUKEN View Post
    Hi teachers:

    I wonder if it is polite ,correct and idomtic.
    Could you check it for me?
    The dentist suggested that John stops eatin some food like chocolate because he has already dacayed teeth.
    Thanks a lot!
    Try,

    The dentist suggested that John stop eating certain foods, like chocolate, because his teeth are decaying.

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