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    please correct my text

    Three parcels for CD arrived in France on December 08 and January 09, your daughter should receive them. Please find the following details for your double-check and advise me if there is any problem. Two remain / rest parcels for slide going to be sent this week. Sorry for the delay-information.

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    Re: please correct my text

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Three parcels for CD arrived in France on December 08 and January 09, your daughter should receive them. Please find the following details for your double-check and advise me if there is any problem. Two remain / rest parcels for slide going to be sent this week. Sorry for the delay-information.
    Three parcels for CD arrived in France on December 08 and January 09, your daughter should receive them.

    This sentence doesn't make any sense. If they have arrived in France already, it should be "Your daughter should have received them."

    Please find the following details for your double-check and advise me if there is any problem. should be "for you to double-check."

    Two remain / rest parcels for slide going to be sent this week. Sorry for the delay-information.

    The two remaining parcels for slide(s) are going to be sent this week.

    We apologize for the delay of this information.

    Question: what is the "slide"?

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