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    #1

    pls. correct two sentences

    We have met / fulfilled the objectives. The factory shipments delay is due to the late L/C from the customer and we cannot transfer it to the factory on time.

    It will be more flexible from shipping dept book the inspection; because we can ensure the customer L/C is received to match with the vessel schedule


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    Re: pls. correct two sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    We have met / fulfilled the objectives. The factory shipment delay is due to the late L/C from the customer as we cannot transfer it to the factory on time.

    It will be more flexible for the shipping dept to book the inspection; because we can ensure the customer L/C is received to match with the vessel schedule
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    #3

    Re: pls. correct two sentences

    Try this:

    We have fulfilled the objectives. There will be a delay in shipping from the factory due to the late arrival of the customer's letter of credit. We cannot transfer it to the factory in time to assure timely shipping.

    We will have more flexibility if the shipping department books the inspection, because then we will be able to ensure that the customer's letter of credit is received in time for us to ship according to the vessel's schedule.


    (Folks, people who are in the habit of writing business letters every day for international corporations should tackle the more business-oriented questions.)


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    Re: pls. correct two sentences

    Anglika... hi! please help me with this. thanks!

    please correct the grammar or revise it. thank you very much!!!


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    He is a complete package: intellectual, charming, rich, and attractive.

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    #5

    Re: pls. correct two sentences

    jillrago, this is identical to your post "correct this please... tnx" at 22:06.


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    #6

    Re: pls. correct two sentences

    i'm so sad... nobody's helping me out...

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    Re: pls. correct two sentences

    This is not a supermarket. You have to wait!

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