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    Sue follows the same routine each day Sue goes to work. Sue wakes up at 7 O'clock in the morning. Before showering and brushing her teeth for five minutes Sue does stretching exercises. Wow! She sure is a disciplined person. Her breakfast usually consists of cereal and fruit with a quick cup of Sue's favorite coffee. Before sitting down to eat she fills the bowl belonging to Jordan with cat food and a small treat of canned tuna. After breakfast it is time to get ready for work. Sue's clothes are always clean and pressed the night before. Blue is Sue's favorite color and her pants and shirt and socks are all shades of blue. Even her shoes are blue. Sue gets dressed, and decides it is time to leave. Picking up the newspaper Sue gets in her car, pulls out of her driveway. Once upon the road Sue's day has begun and she turns on the radio.

    can you please hel[p me revise this sentence


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    Quote Originally Posted by Unregistered View Post
    Routine lifestyle of Sue is as follows;
    the same routine each day Sue goes to is a working women. She wakes up at 7 'O'clock in the morning and do the stretching exercises. Wow! She sure is a disciplined person.

    Before showering, brush her teeth for five minutes. She usually take breakfast consists of cereal and fruit with a cup of her favorite coffee. Before breakfast, sitting down to eat she fills the bowl belonging to Jordan with cat food and a small treat of canned tuna. After breakfast, she will get ready for work.

    Sue's clothes are always clean and pressed the night before. Blue is her favorite color, hence, pants, shirts and socks are all shades of blue. Even her shoes are blue.

    Sue gets dressed, and decides it is time to leave. She picks up the newspaper and gets in her car, pulls out of her driveway. Once on the road, Sue's day has begun and (Beginning of day will count soon after you get up) she turns on the radio.

    can you please hel[p me revise this sentence
    (Not a teacher)

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