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    Exclamation Could anyone correct my pargraph.pls

    Hi dears

    I'm really interested in writing...but i need some practice...So, could you please correct my mistakes to make use of them ..and i want to know how well i'm writing?

    To be alone is a terrible feeling . No one could ever imagine how it hurts untill he tries self-sufficency , self-talk and self-education. "Self" is a reapeted word in lonleness life. Lonley people never seek for noticeable help. They already had enough experience to deal with problems even difficult ones. So, what did they really look for? As they keep silent , the urgent need is to share feelings with the others. they need the others to share sadness and happiness with them. Isolation is a direct result of feeling lonley .It might become a serious disease that threatens their life. They prefer to hide themselves from the compassion of the other people.Really , they are suffring bad ... At the end,I wish sunny days of happiness for those poor people :(

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    I'm waiting for your kind response

    please dears help me

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