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    please help me correct the sentences

    1) He has been awarded a car for ten years service with his company.
    2) I am here to inquire about the job vancancy available here.
    3) I am here to make enquiry about the job vancy available here.

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    Re: please help me correct the sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by Unregistered View Post
    1) He has been awarded a car for ten years' service with ( replace with to or in) his company.
    2) I am here to inquire about the job vancancy available here (replacewith in this company, or currently available, or in xy department)
    3) I am here to make an enquiry about the job vancy available here.(not necessary
    I am not a teacher.

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