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    #1

    Post please correct!!!

    please correct my paragraph.

    I had a pet. It was so cute. I love my pet so much. I always take care of it every night.

    also, please correct the tense.


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    Re: please correct!!!

    Quote Originally Posted by mamen View Post
    please correct my paragraph.

    I had a pet. It was so cute. I love my pet so much. I always take care of it every night.

    also, please correct the tense.
    Your first two sentences are in the past, but then you change to the present. Do you still have this pet?

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    #3

    Re: please correct!!!

    Quote Originally Posted by Anglika View Post
    Your first two sentences are in the past, but then you change to the present. Do you still have this pet?
    not anymore.

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    #4

    Re: please correct!!!

    I had a pet cat. It was so cute. I loved my pet so much. I cared for it every night.

    Now, all the tenses match (you are speaking of something that happened in the past)

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    #5

    Post Re: please correct!!!

    Quote Originally Posted by susiedqq View Post
    I had a pet cat. It was so cute. I loved my pet so much. I cared for it every night.

    Now, all the tenses match (you are speaking of something that happened in the past)
    can I also say "I had a pet cat. It was so cute. I loved my pet so much. I took care of it every night.

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    #6

    Re: please correct!!!

    Quote Originally Posted by mamen View Post
    can I also say "I had a pet cat. It was so cute. I loved my pet so much. I took care of it every night.
    Yes, that's fine. But to make it more interesting you might add a little something. Perhaps:
    I had a pet cat. It was cute and affectionate. He/she liked to snuggle. It would curl up on my lap and go to sleep there.
    (I don't get "I took care of it every night". Didn't you take care if it in the daytime too? (Feeding it, for example?))


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    Re: please correct!!!

    Quote Originally Posted by susiedqq View Post
    I had a pet cat. It was so cute. I loved my pet so much. I cared for it every night.

    Now, all the tenses match (you are speaking of something that happened in the past)

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